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some dogs don't need to hunt
sri lanka! sri lanka!!!!!
ooooh i need a train with big open windows
i wanna touch christina ricci's midget boobs
i should have gave terrence a pain pill
who shoots them self in the chest
my girl just doesn't get it
go to the pub to have someone else make my drinks
hear someone else play and sing
bartenders rely on tips
so i take all mine right out the jar
run right to give it to another bartender
circles don't end until you draw a line through them
sri lanka! sri lanka!!!!!
ooooh i need a train with big open windows
ooooh i need a train with big open windows
i wanna touch christina ricci's midget boobs
i should have gave terrence a pain pill
who shoots them self in the chest
my girl just doesn't get it
go to the pub to have someone else make my drinks
hear someone else play and sing
bartenders rely on tips
so i take all mine right out the jar
run right to give it to another bartender
circles don't end until you draw a line through them
sri lanka! sri lanka!!!!!
ooooh i need a train with big open windows
Published 29th Apr 2014
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30th Apr 2014 5:43am
madness method, you got maps to the dot to shots we'll never understand but your poetic mental reports are an intriguing song, who doesn't want to touch ms. ricci tied to the black snake moan chain
30th Apr 2014 6:58am
go to the pub to have someone else make my drinks
hear someone else play and sing
bartenders rely on tips
so i take all mine right out the jar
run right to give it to another bartender
... great lines here - I've tended bar and can relate; but poetically you address a deeper issue - our need to have others do what we can rightly do ourselves for fear of being alone
hear someone else play and sing
bartenders rely on tips
so i take all mine right out the jar
run right to give it to another bartender
... great lines here - I've tended bar and can relate; but poetically you address a deeper issue - our need to have others do what we can rightly do ourselves for fear of being alone
30th Apr 2014 2:07pm
Love it, John, the insight of your lyrics biting like a wild ass dog fighting for scraps on the street. Anxious to hear the tune !
