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Gabi, I am your man
When I see you so sad
Because life is so bad
And even your hard work
All seems to be in perk
Then, think, Gabi, that I am your man
All my power is weak
Because I am too far
You know how we speak
I wish to take my car
Then, think, baby, that I am your man
But you know of course
As a charming prince, a day
On his nice white horse
I will be on your highway
Then, think, Gabi, that I am your man
A little call, just a while
And you are at your door
My happiness will be more
To see your large smile
Then you'll know, Gabi, my woman
That I am definitively your man
Sure, Gabi, I am your man...
Oh, I must tell the truth : Leonard Cohen inspired me, but I didn't absolutely have the talentuous beauty of his song. Just I had his song in my mind when I wrote this text.
Published 28th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 10:58pm
What a beautiful fulfilling enchanting write to your woman. She's got to smile with these luving moving words your heart has written. Really enjoyed this wonderful write. :)
28th Apr 2014 11:06pm
Flower, your words are so beautiful
That my face is blushing like a rose
Flower, your compliments are wonderful
That I must take now a little pause
Thank you so much, for your comment
A very nice, very splendid compliment
That my face is blushing like a rose
Flower, your compliments are wonderful
That I must take now a little pause
Thank you so much, for your comment
A very nice, very splendid compliment
29th Apr 2014 00:10am
Thank you, Leonard C., to have inspired me!!! Thank you, Gabi, my muse, for your so wonderful comment...
29th Apr 2014 1:30am
29th Apr 2014 6:21am
29th Apr 2014 2:07am
There is something so reassuring, tender and loving about your words and your poem. It touched me deeply and your beautiful words will stay with me for a long time to come..... :) ♡♡♡
29th Apr 2014 6:23am
I am very happy that this poem touchs you as you tell me, I am proud for that and in same time, blushing of happiness! Thank you, Scarlett.
29th Apr 2014 8:18pm
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