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Coz I don't like...
This evening, my love was very sad
When I saw that, I was really mad
Coz I don't like she becomes bad
Baby, my love, please just a smile
During a short time, just a while
Coz I don't like to become senile
Imagine I could accept her sadness
Dislike her face without happiness
Coz I don't like we are loveless
Then I have tried to become her hero
Perhaps an error in her deep though
Coz I don't like to feel a true zero
I just have now to wait her call
I need to get a kiss, just a small
Coz I don't like to loose, to fall
Please, just a lil call, not to ban
A short time, I'll become superman
Coz I should be the happiest man
Published 23rd Apr 2014
| Edited 24th Apr 2014
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24th Apr 2014 2:50am
24th Apr 2014 2:59am
Anonymous
24th Apr 2014 6:05am
I hope she hears your soul words and thoughts. Great write. Felt it much. :(
24th Apr 2014 9:35pm
24th Apr 2014 11:07pm
I felt you in this poem......
Very very sweet!!!! Yes. I believe she hears you......
:) ♡♡♡
Very very sweet!!!! Yes. I believe she hears you......
:) ♡♡♡
25th Apr 2014 00:49am
Hey, Scarlett, what a nice comment! Thank you so much! Yes, she hears, me, but dare not to comment it. She is better now!
26th Apr 2014 12:34pm
26th Apr 2014 2:22pm
First time I use it. Thank you to your support, I'll try again, perhaps sequences with a triplet and a doublet!
