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Words - Trilogy of senryu
Facing walls of words
Overcasting sunlit skies
Heart besieging pain
Words so dense they mass
Pitch black all-consuming holes
Suck up pride and joy
Choke on words of woe
Suffocating heart and soul
Shattered dreams of bliss
Overcasting sunlit skies
Heart besieging pain
Words so dense they mass
Pitch black all-consuming holes
Suck up pride and joy
Choke on words of woe
Suffocating heart and soul
Shattered dreams of bliss
Published 23rd Apr 2014
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23rd Apr 2014 8:16pm
23rd Apr 2014 8:19pm
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2014 8:35pm
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23rd Apr 2014 8:44pm
Thanks, Gabriel! It's been taken in South Africa :-).
I love your sweet comment as well as your little emoticons 💋. That one I stole from you, ha!
I love your sweet comment as well as your little emoticons 💋. That one I stole from you, ha!
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2014 9:05pm
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23rd Apr 2014 10:28pm
You know that your words and thoughts mean much to me? Thank you, Paul, for your thoughtful comment. Glad about it ... Very much.
23rd Apr 2014 11:59pm
24th Apr 2014 00:09am
24th Apr 2014 1:01am
24th Apr 2014 6:35am
24th Apr 2014 2:17am
24th Apr 2014 6:39am
As desolate as my mood when I wrote it.
Yeah, the photo! It shows a strong and lively tree overseeing a beautiful landscape :-). Glad you like it!
Yeah, the photo! It shows a strong and lively tree overseeing a beautiful landscape :-). Glad you like it!
24th Apr 2014 5:49am
24th Apr 2014 6:39am
Anonymous
24th Apr 2014 6:55am
This poem leaves me in silence...
Fantastic work!
Fantastic work!
24th Apr 2014 7:09am
Thank you so much, Mourganna! I'm humbled by your kind words since I'm a great admirer of your wonderful poems!
25th Apr 2014 2:09pm
Sadness spilled throughout this
very fine crafting of pain... That pic. Being so
serene belies the turmoil of th heart...
very fine crafting of pain... That pic. Being so
serene belies the turmoil of th heart...
25th Apr 2014 6:09pm
Ah, Poe. Your lovely comment comforts me and and at least the pain was good for another poem. The pic. It comforts me, too, since I took it in Africa which is kind of a home for me. Thank you for feeling me, dear!
