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please stop! I love you
You suffer euphoria induced alcohol
Embarrassment of you are plentyful
My tears are numb to your hatred
Your verbal poison lasting hours
Please stop! I love you
The cold steel blade slithers wrists
Seems like tranquility alluring fate
Your voice withers away with fading heartbeats.
Embarrassment of you are plentyful
My tears are numb to your hatred
Your verbal poison lasting hours
Please stop! I love you
The cold steel blade slithers wrists
Seems like tranquility alluring fate
Your voice withers away with fading heartbeats.
Published 23rd Apr 2014
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23rd Apr 2014 4:17am
This is so sad......I feel you here. I've learned a lot of pain thru alcohol in many different ways. Xo :(
23rd Apr 2014 4:47am
23rd Apr 2014 4:55am
...don't like reading this type of ink from you....beautifully written though. ;) Xo
23rd Apr 2014 5:14am
Awe...and you still read me...my messiah...
Kudos hun thanks for your time....just remembering a dark
moment I had awhile ago...that you know of...coz you were there for me:)
Just warming up lol...
Kudos hun thanks for your time....just remembering a dark
moment I had awhile ago...that you know of...coz you were there for me:)
Just warming up lol...
23rd Apr 2014 5:26am
28th Apr 2014 11:47pm
Excellent write, powerfully put together and wonderfully presented. Keep it up!
-Lissie
-Lissie
29th Apr 2014 1:06am
