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so long, good bye, and hello
memories of old
come to mind
dim-lighted room
darkness just outside the window
walks by an old widow
love, love and hatred she says
a good soldier
gave his life
that a young man
might live
selflessly
hate, hate fills the souls
a pain carried
a memory inside
and something to hide
never would i ask
of attest to the facts
just ask to reveal the the hidden
let me forget the forbidden
good bye, good bye forever
and hello tomorrow
come to mind
dim-lighted room
darkness just outside the window
walks by an old widow
love, love and hatred she says
a good soldier
gave his life
that a young man
might live
selflessly
hate, hate fills the souls
a pain carried
a memory inside
and something to hide
never would i ask
of attest to the facts
just ask to reveal the the hidden
let me forget the forbidden
good bye, good bye forever
and hello tomorrow
Published 17th Apr 2014
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17th Apr 2014 4:14am
Nice poem, your words fit together in a good way to tell the story.
Great job!
-A
Great job!
-A
17th Apr 2014 7:42am
