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the morning after train...
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the morning after train...
here in the commuter belt,
we all travel to work
a little tight...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published
16th Apr 2014
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Re: the morning after train...
DarkEnchantress
17th Apr 2014 3:02pm
Compacted
in close proximity
perhaps....
yet each 'lost'
in individual
indifferences
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re: Re: the morning after train...
dartford
(Paul S...)
17th Apr 2014 11:32pm
the early morning rush hour
makes sardines look like
loners..:)
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Re: the morning after train...
LobodeSanPedro
17th Apr 2014 9:32pm
Hmm ... tight belt as in living check to check while going through the grind. It's funny bc "you tight" is also the term kids use today to describe someone who's embarrassed or frustrated.
Cool piece.
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re: Re: the morning after train...
dartford
(Paul S...)
17th Apr 2014 11:35pm
well, frustration is the 7.35
from Dartford to Charing Cross..:)
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Re: the morning after train...
Hashman
17th Apr 2014 10:00pm
Squeeze please...
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re: Re: the morning after train...
dartford
(Paul S...)
17th Apr 2014 11:36pm
ok..!
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