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Walked out
As she walked,
Out of my life.
She took with her,
The very air I breathed.
Such was the punch,
I felt in my stomach.
Leaving me,
Gasping,
Doubled over,
As if a fetus,
Curled,
On the floor.
Out of my life.
She took with her,
The very air I breathed.
Such was the punch,
I felt in my stomach.
Leaving me,
Gasping,
Doubled over,
As if a fetus,
Curled,
On the floor.
Published 16th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 7:13am
So sad and breathless. Luv the emotion and feelings dripping off the ink. :)
18th Apr 2014 4:19pm
Thank you!
I think you got the image I was working for. Breathless. Exactly.
Jay
I think you got the image I was working for. Breathless. Exactly.
Jay
