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who's willing?
My blade runs a bloody smile
along her flawless neck decorating red
Longing for her pain to release me
laying on her side she gasps final breaths
Her Blood splashes unto her as I dance with satan
Screams turned whimpers as the red flow ceases.
She held my life in her hands
Now where will my life land?
And who's willing?
along her flawless neck decorating red
Longing for her pain to release me
laying on her side she gasps final breaths
Her Blood splashes unto her as I dance with satan
Screams turned whimpers as the red flow ceases.
She held my life in her hands
Now where will my life land?
And who's willing?
Published 15th Apr 2014
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15th Apr 2014 6:58am
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful piece, smiles. I love this. Xo
Now, put the blade down....:)
Now, put the blade down....:)
15th Apr 2014 8:14am
Hahaha....blade down bow down to the messiah of ink.
The picture was clear in my head when writing this but when it came putting it together the picture blurred and couldnt make sense of it lol...oh well...thanks for reading and the awesome encouragement.
The picture was clear in my head when writing this but when it came putting it together the picture blurred and couldnt make sense of it lol...oh well...thanks for reading and the awesome encouragement.
15th Apr 2014 1:23pm
15th Apr 2014 10:57pm
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22nd Apr 2014 3:31am
You always did write powerful. I got goosebumps. LOL!!! Xo :)
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24th Apr 2014 7:04am
Thanks a lot , but anyone liking this so called poetry is just as crazy as I am....hahaha peace
28th Apr 2014 3:36am
28th Apr 2014 4:18am
24th Sep 2014 00:37am
You're going to end up alone if you keep killing them, Domino~
I didn't know you were so dark--
If I did, I would have come around earlier~ :D
Lovely.
Haven't read simple gore in a while--
Well done~
I didn't know you were so dark--
If I did, I would have come around earlier~ :D
Lovely.
Haven't read simple gore in a while--
Well done~
