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so what
so what i feel bad most of the time
so what i laugh at pain
so what im crazy
so what i dont care
so what i think everything is funny
so what i only wear certain clothes
so what i yell at stupid times
so what im not you so just leave me the fuck alone
so what i laugh at pain
so what im crazy
so what i dont care
so what i think everything is funny
so what i only wear certain clothes
so what i yell at stupid times
so what im not you so just leave me the fuck alone
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Re: so what
Anonymous
10th Apr 2014 4:10pm
I feel this is rather poor really. It looks rushed, but maybe that's your style-spur of the moment. I like the 'up yours' & 'two fingers' message but I'd like to have read some more.

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10th Apr 2014 4:13pm
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28th Apr 2014 4:18am
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 9:01am
Cool!

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10th Apr 2014 4:18pm
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10th Apr 2014 4:27pm
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2014 6:20pm
You should have said: "fuck You, and have a nice day!". . .other than that, stay you, true. Well done.

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11th Apr 2014 3:55pm
Re: so what
10th Apr 2014 9:00pm
i realy like this its how i feel most of the time when it comes to people :) great job
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25th Apr 2014 1:58am
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30th Apr 2014 11:07pm
Yeah! Let it out! Give those sons of bitches what for! It's very liberating. Enjoyed it.
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Re: so what
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jul 2014 12:33pm
25th Jul 2014 7:48pm
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