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silent scream
I need to vent
Can you help?
I know you're there
But your unaware
What's going on
I know exactly what's wrong
But it makes no different
This feeling of pain.
Come closer and you'll see
My lips are screaming
But my lungs have no air left
To let me project my plea
Can you help?
I know you're there
But your unaware
What's going on
I know exactly what's wrong
But it makes no different
This feeling of pain.
Come closer and you'll see
My lips are screaming
But my lungs have no air left
To let me project my plea
Published 5th Apr 2014
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5th Apr 2014 8:00pm
A raw and honest piece if I've ever seen one.
I wonder what inspired it....
Xx
I wonder what inspired it....
Xx
5th Apr 2014 9:11pm
My dearest, thank you for yoursupport! It keeps me at ease and gives me hope :)
5th Apr 2014 9:39pm
5th Apr 2014 8:28pm
you can really feel the characters despair, and almost irritation it seems, in this piece. very vivid emotions. great work!
5th Apr 2014 9:12pm
