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Mr & Mrs Fox pt. 2 <3 (shall i make a part 3?)
Mr & Mrs Fox Pt. 2
The reynard slipped amongst the eyes
And said n to everyones suprise,
"Ive heard your begging heart just yearning for the learning of life
And such a short one, we dont go the time to learn it twice
But love is a matter, and its a positive note
If we can just bury the knife
That created the wound
That we find in most souls
You a vixen , in high demand and low competition
Blushing scarlet, and your form helps me forms my opinions
We could be romantics, optimistic I am
Your kind of love is a rolling sea,
I prefer to be the sand
Wash over me.
Watch over me.
And we can see if love comes totally."
- OLP .. <3
The reynard slipped amongst the eyes
And said n to everyones suprise,
"Ive heard your begging heart just yearning for the learning of life
And such a short one, we dont go the time to learn it twice
But love is a matter, and its a positive note
If we can just bury the knife
That created the wound
That we find in most souls
You a vixen , in high demand and low competition
Blushing scarlet, and your form helps me forms my opinions
We could be romantics, optimistic I am
Your kind of love is a rolling sea,
I prefer to be the sand
Wash over me.
Watch over me.
And we can see if love comes totally."
- OLP .. <3
Published 4th Apr 2014
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4th Apr 2014 8:40pm
To answer the titles questions--yes part three! :) Couple small things for you to look at and see if you want to change.
"And said n " --delete the n??
" we dont go the"--got
"And said n " --delete the n??
" we dont go the"--got
13th Apr 2014 5:12am
