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Baby you got Diamonds xx
Youth is like diamonds in the sun
And diamonds are forever
You shall live forever
Your Diamonds they will shine
And like watching a sunrise over a river
The ripples they will shimmer
Reviving all the light
The night had stolen from your eyes
And those eyes will open wider
As you hear all of them whisper
About the one that undisputably
Has diamonds in the sun
And as you walk through doors wide open
Know they wont be closing
Cos' those Diamonds live forever
In your Beauty....
And your love xx
And diamonds are forever
You shall live forever
Your Diamonds they will shine
And like watching a sunrise over a river
The ripples they will shimmer
Reviving all the light
The night had stolen from your eyes
And those eyes will open wider
As you hear all of them whisper
About the one that undisputably
Has diamonds in the sun
And as you walk through doors wide open
Know they wont be closing
Cos' those Diamonds live forever
In your Beauty....
And your love xx
Published 12th Mar 2011
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2011 2:58pm
I like the rhythm of this. The only thing I could think of changing is maybe the second to last line "in your Beauty". It throws off the rhythm a bit, but it's still very good with. :]
12th Mar 2011 10:54pm
Thanks, yes I now see what you mean:) Thanks for the advice I'll take it aboard.
Anonymous
12th Mar 2011 11:49pm
this poem does flow really well! great job! keep up the good work!
29th Mar 2011 1:46am
