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Live While You Can
This won't fit in my exhibit
Larger than life
Better get wit it
Life's a dream
And I am in it
Weather you can deal
Or except in it
That's up to you
So fly off wit it
Into the night's sky
We can take a hit off it
Blessed we all
So take a bow for it
Life's so beautiful
Love's entitlement
Just come along babe
Go get lost in it
When we're done
There'll be nothin' left of it
Party so hard
Celebrate'n life
Rock'n so hard
All throughout the night
Just livin' it
It pass' so quick
From the time you wake
Till you get your fix
Time to quit
That's it
Hope you enjoyed your visit
You won't be back so...
fuck it -walks away-
Larger than life
Better get wit it
Life's a dream
And I am in it
Weather you can deal
Or except in it
That's up to you
So fly off wit it
Into the night's sky
We can take a hit off it
Blessed we all
So take a bow for it
Life's so beautiful
Love's entitlement
Just come along babe
Go get lost in it
When we're done
There'll be nothin' left of it
Party so hard
Celebrate'n life
Rock'n so hard
All throughout the night
Just livin' it
It pass' so quick
From the time you wake
Till you get your fix
Time to quit
That's it
Hope you enjoyed your visit
You won't be back so...
fuck it -walks away-
Published 29th Mar 2014
| Edited 3rd Aug 2014
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Anonymous
30th Mar 2014 4:37am
A moment lived today.....is gone tomorrow. Enjoyed this write. :)
30th Mar 2014 2:41pm
Thanks Flowergirl, glad you liked it :)Sometimes I feel like I'm not writing what I could, you know, to my full potential. I need more practice and I need to read more poems by other people...
Anonymous
30th Mar 2014 8:57pm
You know the words down in your soul. Learn to write them. Write down a few words of how you feel. Keep writing on them till your feelings are what you just wrote. If your own words makes you cry, smile and feel to you as you want your reader to feel when they read them.....then you have written yourself. It's hard....cause you will get more emotions from within yourself than you know is there. I luv what you write, so don't change much. Xo :)
31st Mar 2014 4:36am
Thanks Flowegirl, in reality you've been one of the most inspirational influences of my life as a teenager and now into my adulthood...thank you so much for...well everything you have done and said, for being such a supportive and great friend!I am truly blessed to have the friends that I do :')
Anonymous
31st Mar 2014 4:56am
Awe! Thank you for touching my life back as well. We are blessed to have such a beautiful souled young Lady and a great friend to grace our lives. Xo :)
