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when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
I ran away from home, it was the end of
the road as far as I was concerned,
so I went back...
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Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
29th Mar 2014 2:07am
I don't quite understand the meaning to this poem. It seems almost contradictory.. if you, or said subject, ran away from home, it was the end of what road? A literal road? A metaphor? You went back where? It certainly makes you think of what you may mean but you could not come to a valid conclusion when this poem is only three lines, it would be hard to relate to or understand in my opinion.
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re: Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
29th Mar 2014 2:17am
Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
it seems
as children
our anger lasted
so briefly....
only to the end
of our security
(or our road...or our predetermined boundaries...something of that sort :) )
as children
our anger lasted
so briefly....
only to the end
of our security
(or our road...or our predetermined boundaries...something of that sort :) )
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re: Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
29th Mar 2014 10:04am
Thats's it, Enchantress, everything
was really good, or else everything
was so bleak and desolate...and
everything could change so
quickly..:)
was really good, or else everything
was so bleak and desolate...and
everything could change so
quickly..:)
Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
Reminds me of our youngest
who packed up at the age of 4 and
left the property,
semi-turned the corner,
still within sight, yet looking back with longing.
And I went out and took him home.
Was it like that for you? This poem touched me.
who packed up at the age of 4 and
left the property,
semi-turned the corner,
still within sight, yet looking back with longing.
And I went out and took him home.
Was it like that for you? This poem touched me.
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re: Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
29th Mar 2014 11:49pm
as far as I can remember, I was
gone for such a short time that
no one had noticed when I
crept shamefaced back into the
house...I think it was a Sunday &
I knew I was going to be in trouble
at school the next day, but I can't
remember why, now...thanks, Chi..:)
gone for such a short time that
no one had noticed when I
crept shamefaced back into the
house...I think it was a Sunday &
I knew I was going to be in trouble
at school the next day, but I can't
remember why, now...thanks, Chi..:)
Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
30th Mar 2014 1:46pm
re: Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
30th Mar 2014 3:25pm
as an adventure it was short but
intense...in tents I might have
stayed out longer..:)
intense...in tents I might have
stayed out longer..:)
Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
Anonymous
30th Mar 2014 2:30pm
This made me think of a time when I ran away from home after my stepfather smacked me. I was barefoot in the rain on my bicycle. Then Nana brought me back home. Nice piece!

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re: Re: when I was eight, I was really, really cross...
30th Mar 2014 3:27pm
we never forget times like that,
do we..? thanks for the read
and the empathy..:)
do we..? thanks for the read
and the empathy..:)