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Not all roses
I pray
that the thorns
of the roses, once so red
whose opulent charm
again was meant to plead
for absolution
will make sure that you always remember
that night in [too] late September
when your pricked fingers
satisfyingly resembled
my bleeding heart.
that the thorns
of the roses, once so red
whose opulent charm
again was meant to plead
for absolution
will make sure that you always remember
that night in [too] late September
when your pricked fingers
satisfyingly resembled
my bleeding heart.
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Re: Not all roses
27th Mar 2014 10:14pm
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Thank you so much, Sir Lancelott! Glad you stopped by and happy that you found such kind words for me!
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27th Mar 2014 10:16pm
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27th Mar 2014 10:19pm
Haha! Hot goth like ink! That's something! Thanks, Speak! I appreciate your thoughts so much!
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27th Mar 2014 10:32pm
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27th Mar 2014 11:16pm
Re: Not all roses
28th Mar 2014 1:45am
I know someone who says men only gives flowers when they're at their worst or have done something wrong. I don't agree ... Is that your thought with this Miss Chi?
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28th Mar 2014 7:16am
I won't agree either, LSP, but in this case it's the underlying message, yes. Thank you for asking and sharing your thoughts!
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2014 2:16am
Sometimes no amount of any offering can make up a broken heart. Powerful ink as usual Ms. Chi.
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re: Re: Not all roses
28th Mar 2014 7:19am
Sometimes there's nothing left to offer and no way to accept further apologies. Thanks, dear Vee/Nikki (by which name shall I call you now?)for your kind remark.
Re: Not all roses
28th Mar 2014 2:57am
Wow this one has a BIG punch to it my sweetheart...
Hoping all is well with you :(
Hoping all is well with you :(
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28th Mar 2014 7:22am
YES! Thanks for caring, Poe! It's just a poem and has nothing to do with my personal life just with life in general :-). I appreaciate your lovely words!
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28th Mar 2014 6:21am
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28th Mar 2014 7:23am
Dear Brinda, glad that you like it and I love your superamazing (SWEET) words so much! Thank you!
Re: Not all roses
28th Mar 2014 6:40am
every rose has thorns. maybe all beautiful things should have that defense...
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I fully agree with you. In nature most beautiful creatures and things do have some kind of defense against harm, what kind of amor do our souls have for protection? Thank you, John, for your beautiful words.
Re: Not all roses
28th Mar 2014 6:01pm
The bleeding heart in some form is a pain all of us feel. Sometimes however if we are strong enough to assess intent, we can discover a type of wisdom that hopefully can be put to good use.
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28th Mar 2014 7:17pm
We're united in bleeding hearts :-). That's a great vision! Wisdom - if manhood disposed of wisdom there would be no heartache, no wars, no suffering. Thanks for your great comment, JAZZ. Much appreciate you.
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2014 2:35pm
This is such a great poem, Chi, bitter sweet melody!
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1st Apr 2014 9:36pm
Thank you so much, dear friend! Glad to see you again! I hope that means you've carved a poem yourself and published it:-). xoxo
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4th Apr 2014 10:17pm
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24th Apr 2014 9:24am
Nice poem Miss C. I like the content and the structure. Vivid and deep, again.
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24th Apr 2014 11:41am
Thanks a lot, Spanker, for your kind words! Good to read and hear from you again!