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words
words wander aimlessly and wonderfully so beautifully
swirling quite magnificently cooly taking form.
they fit together perfectly and ever so alluringly
elusively avoiding all thats negatively charmed.
swirling quite magnificently cooly taking form.
they fit together perfectly and ever so alluringly
elusively avoiding all thats negatively charmed.
Published 25th Mar 2014
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um...no...ahhh...no...ahum...well, the second line is rather crowded. aside from that, the piece is a wonderful study in treading the border between beautifully flowing and way too much.
19th Jun 2014 9:09am
that was my point. to cram as many words into it that ended in ly as i possibly could. and as much in without it being Too Much.
20th Jun 2014 4:31am
now this is a good response to a compliment/criticism. you knew what you were doing and clearly tell me so.
