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a little daring, perhaps...
you looked great
in that dress...
a bit of a risk,
but it came off...
Published 24th Mar 2014
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25th Mar 2014 1:50am
(Hee!! Hee!!)
Where's the fun
and excitement
in life
without taking
a bit of risk
Where's the fun
and excitement
in life
without taking
a bit of risk
25th Mar 2014 12:48pm
25th Mar 2014 2:33am
25th Mar 2014 12:50pm
25th Mar 2014 2:40am
I love the subtle twist of the last line ... She pulled off wearing a dress few women would or could ... And at the end of the night she took it off and put on what you like to see her in best ... nothing
(reminds me of an epic night in Vegas)
Salud
(reminds me of an epic night in Vegas)
Salud
25th Mar 2014 12:52pm
25th Mar 2014 7:50pm
25th Mar 2014 9:09pm
