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The Demise Of Newton's Law
The angel of death waved goodbye
You abandoned me , like an unwanted child
Born out of a passionate session that night
No identity , No future , No name
Pain is pleasure , Give me more
Hungry for your flesh , thirsty for your blood
Extinguish my yearning , which only you can
Liberate my soul , walk me to nirvana
Hurt me so much that even scars turn shy
Bruise every element of my existence
Sting me with your evil thoughts
Let my soul bleed and set me free..
And yes , CONGRATULATIONS !
You proved Newton Wrong ( Applause )
Every action has an equal and opposite Reaction ?
Think about it . Think Again. Think Twice. May Be Thrice.
Every question is an answer and every answer is a lie.
Afterthought
(((( You loved me for an instance , I lived you for a lifetime
You cared for a while ,but for you I'm still ready to walk that extra mile.
You showed me a different world ,which everyone left , now only I reside
You gave me wings once upon a time , But now I cant Fly , I died Deep Inside ))))
You abandoned me , like an unwanted child
Born out of a passionate session that night
No identity , No future , No name
Pain is pleasure , Give me more
Hungry for your flesh , thirsty for your blood
Extinguish my yearning , which only you can
Liberate my soul , walk me to nirvana
Hurt me so much that even scars turn shy
Bruise every element of my existence
Sting me with your evil thoughts
Let my soul bleed and set me free..
And yes , CONGRATULATIONS !
You proved Newton Wrong ( Applause )
Every action has an equal and opposite Reaction ?
Think about it . Think Again. Think Twice. May Be Thrice.
Every question is an answer and every answer is a lie.
Afterthought
(((( You loved me for an instance , I lived you for a lifetime
You cared for a while ,but for you I'm still ready to walk that extra mile.
You showed me a different world ,which everyone left , now only I reside
You gave me wings once upon a time , But now I cant Fly , I died Deep Inside ))))
Published 9th Mar 2011
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16th Mar 2011 1:48pm
Thats quite a way to vent out your frustration.
I assume it's your age , or may be you are like that.
I assume it's your age , or may be you are like that.
Anonymous
27th Jun 2011 7:29pm
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25th May 2012 12:52pm
It's lovely, really. I'm lucky to have gotten a chance to enjoy it. You can tell you're a very passionate person.
A couple of things if you don't mind:
- "... Think Twice. May Be Thrice. ..." 'May Be' should be one word: 'Maybe.'
- In your Afterthought you wrote "... You loved me for an instance , I lived you for..." Did you mean "I LOVED you for..."?
- and then you wrote "...which everyone left , now only I reside..." I think it would move better if you added a "where" before the "now only I reside" so it would read:
"You showed me a different world ,which everyone left , where now only I reside"
A couple of things if you don't mind:
- "... Think Twice. May Be Thrice. ..." 'May Be' should be one word: 'Maybe.'
- In your Afterthought you wrote "... You loved me for an instance , I lived you for..." Did you mean "I LOVED you for..."?
- and then you wrote "...which everyone left , now only I reside..." I think it would move better if you added a "where" before the "now only I reside" so it would read:
"You showed me a different world ,which everyone left , where now only I reside"
5th Dec 2012 11:09pm
