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My place
Have you ever been so attached to a place that when youngest you felt drained??
Bright green grass
My new tipi
Memories
Lots of laughs
We'll I'm leaving my place
But there are many new memories there
Sitting shotgun in the car
I can feel the tears filling my eyes as we are driving away
Thank The Lord my best friend was here
I would of crashed I would be crying to much
This time I have made many new memories
Got on a horse for the first time in about 4/5 years
I'm gonna miss it
But I'll be back next weekend
To my place
Bright green grass
My new tipi
Memories
Lots of laughs
We'll I'm leaving my place
But there are many new memories there
Sitting shotgun in the car
I can feel the tears filling my eyes as we are driving away
Thank The Lord my best friend was here
I would of crashed I would be crying to much
This time I have made many new memories
Got on a horse for the first time in about 4/5 years
I'm gonna miss it
But I'll be back next weekend
To my place
Published 24th Mar 2014
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24th Mar 2014 5:13am
Ok
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24th Mar 2014 2:48pm
25th Mar 2014 3:14am
Those first two lines ... Magical!
This reminds of my childhood goodbyes leaving my grandmother's farm in South Carolina ... I thought I'd die in that car as we pulled away
cool piece
This reminds of my childhood goodbyes leaving my grandmother's farm in South Carolina ... I thought I'd die in that car as we pulled away
cool piece
25th Mar 2014 4:07am
This is a sweet piece...Every childs got that place of thiers...reminds me of my own some years ago in an abandoned play house in a parking lot across from where I lived...nice one with emotion :-)
