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My Break Up
My day was dark, our night was fire
You spoke of death - our life, with no desire
I cried like rain and you yelled like thunder
The fire was out, leaving my life a blunder.
I saw a life through all the smoke and pain
Walking away in hope of this new life to gain
With every new sunrise washing away the past
My heart is happy, free, and alone at last.
You spoke of death - our life, with no desire
I cried like rain and you yelled like thunder
The fire was out, leaving my life a blunder.
I saw a life through all the smoke and pain
Walking away in hope of this new life to gain
With every new sunrise washing away the past
My heart is happy, free, and alone at last.
Published 19th Mar 2014
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19th Mar 2014 10:26pm
Wow! You are really good at giving someone all the emotions you feel when you write.
21st Mar 2014 1:20pm
Anonymous
14th Apr 2014 3:36am
It's good. Using the weather to describe your pain.
