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The Gang
Black spiraling into more black where it does not end
Fury finds a friend in morbid
Morbid hangs out with sinister
Sinister is a snitch and rats off deception
They all tend to piss their pants over chaos
And in the end only procrastination makes it
Because they were late as usual
L
Fury finds a friend in morbid
Morbid hangs out with sinister
Sinister is a snitch and rats off deception
They all tend to piss their pants over chaos
And in the end only procrastination makes it
Because they were late as usual
L
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Re: The Gang
19th Mar 2014 8:00am
This is Very right on my friend, reminds me of Somethin that Lennon would have written... Or perhaps Jim Morrison, you have a good insight, to the inner self, the inner soul... Chaos an procrastination, I know these two gifts very well my friend, am a big fan of Chaos, an its unpredictability, as Chaos is not Evil, but rather is not in order, an unpredictable, Very spur of the moment, hehehe...
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re: Re: The Gang
19th Mar 2014 8:13am
I love your comments I think this would make a great song along with "Riders on the storm" hehe
or abbey road...
as for now I thank you very much
or abbey road...
as for now I thank you very much
Re: The Gang
19th Mar 2014 8:26am
Well, this is one of the Cantos in the Beauty an the Beast, after went lulu an is in Hell tryin to get his mind back. hehehe,
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Re: The Gang
19th Mar 2014 3:51pm
I like this very much, its the best kind of satire and a keen observation on the true meaning of chaos. I enjoyed it very much.
Welcome to deep underground by the way:)
Welcome to deep underground by the way:)
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re: Re: The Gang
20th Mar 2014 8:43am
thank you very much for your read and comment! They are appreciated. I am very glad to be here at the deep underground... :)
Re: The Gang
19th Mar 2014 6:58pm
I can see this Gang circling with black wings
searching for the weakness in all hopeless things
One of my favorite types of writing,
Thanks,and Welcome To DU
searching for the weakness in all hopeless things
One of my favorite types of writing,
Thanks,and Welcome To DU
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re: Re: The Gang
20th Mar 2014 8:48am
HI, thanks for stopping by and reading... Glad you liked it.. really appreciate the comment. and the warm welcome... !
Re: The Gang
Anonymous
19th Mar 2014 8:22pm
Awesome piece here. Thought provoking for sure. :)
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re: Re: The Gang
20th Mar 2014 8:50am
Hi Flowergirl!! how are you? thanks for stopping by and reading. .... totally appreciate.
susan
susan
re: Re: The Gang
21st Mar 2014 7:07pm