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Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-17) : Terrific silence
Terrific silence
An huge hole in my poor heart
Where are you my love?
Published 17th Mar 2014
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17th Mar 2014 2:31pm
17th Mar 2014 2:38pm
Yes, right, when I write an haiku (surely all the authors do that), each word is examinated and chosen... Very nice form of poetry. Thank you for your visit and your comment, very nice!
17th Mar 2014 4:18pm
My hunch tells me she is always with you and loves you very deeply -- don't ask me how I know that, but I am extremely intuitive and usually right about these kind of things.... :) ♡♡♡
17th Mar 2014 4:22pm
I think she is living bad events, but her silence is very hard for me.
Thank you so much, Scarlet, you are so kind!!!
Thank you so much, Scarlet, you are so kind!!!
