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SEAMLESS
Flag blowing freely within your arms,
As free as a sloop upon the sea.
Naked within your sheets,
With only your love to clothe me.
Lightly cast and lightly held
With starlight to guide our path.
And a warm heart, a held hand
Till earth be left at last.
Upon eagle wing, my angel wing,
Floating freely upon a feather,
Castaways upon seamless time,
So we float on forever.
(entered in kourtnissixxx fieldtrip to summerland)
As free as a sloop upon the sea.
Naked within your sheets,
With only your love to clothe me.
Lightly cast and lightly held
With starlight to guide our path.
And a warm heart, a held hand
Till earth be left at last.
Upon eagle wing, my angel wing,
Floating freely upon a feather,
Castaways upon seamless time,
So we float on forever.
(entered in kourtnissixxx fieldtrip to summerland)
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Re: SEAMLESS
12th Mar 2014 1:39am
My friend, somehow, this piece just seems to echo John Masefield...(just reminds me of "Sea Fever")==the cadence... and perhaps the tranquility of the metaphor of the(love of the sea)-- with respect to the poet's/narrator's feelings towards this special person.
An effortless, gentle journey into the serenity of Summer!
My best of luck to you in the comp!
An effortless, gentle journey into the serenity of Summer!
My best of luck to you in the comp!
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re: Re: SEAMLESS
12th Mar 2014 2:14am
that's great enchantress that you felt that - it is one of my favourites and always with me - the whale's way :)
Re: SEAMLESS
12th Mar 2014 2:39am
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Thanks Tristique its the feeling of two eternal souls transmuting from water to earth to air but remaining in essence the same - love
Re: SEAMLESS
12th Mar 2014 10:24am
a beautiful odyssey told from the sea to the stars ...
... Good luck in the comp.
... Good luck in the comp.
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re: Re: SEAMLESS
12th Mar 2014 1:16pm
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12th Mar 2014 10:11pm
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I can see what Enchantress meant
about Masefield, I had the same
feeling...it's a bit of a classic..:)
about Masefield, I had the same
feeling...it's a bit of a classic..:)
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re: Re: SEAMLESS
dwarves on the shoulders of giants see somewhere new but are nothing without the giants - its an honour to be so compared
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2014 2:22pm
I had this image of something feather like floating through air and landing down upon a green field
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re: Re: SEAMLESS
16th Mar 2014 3:13pm
Re. SEAMLESS
28th Jul 2015 6:08am
You are surely beauty itself, its evident
asy breathing is smoothly flowing when
reading. Lovely
asy breathing is smoothly flowing when
reading. Lovely
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