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AMAZING
Out of pain and desperation,
I asked God to show me something.
Something different,
something unreal,
something amazing.
It was then I realized
I was living.
That I was standing on a spinning sphere'
with a chance at life.
That's pretty amazing if you ask me.
So I asked God for nothing more.
I asked God to show me something.
Something different,
something unreal,
something amazing.
It was then I realized
I was living.
That I was standing on a spinning sphere'
with a chance at life.
That's pretty amazing if you ask me.
So I asked God for nothing more.
Published 11th Mar 2014
| Edited 31st Mar 2014
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11th Mar 2014 4:38am
Jasper,
This piece speaks to the soul, my Friend!
Life--indeed--is a precious gift....in any, and all forms....
The hope (your's) within this piece shines forth! Thank you for sharing
Inspiring Ink!
This piece speaks to the soul, my Friend!
Life--indeed--is a precious gift....in any, and all forms....
The hope (your's) within this piece shines forth! Thank you for sharing
Inspiring Ink!
11th Mar 2014 7:49am
Wow. This poem is amazing-- God is amazing! Thanks for spreading His love through your work :)
13th Mar 2014 1:41pm
15th Mar 2014 1:30am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
22nd Mar 2014 1:14pm
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