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Soaked In The Juices Of Sex
Aggressive whispers in my ear
strong hands pulling my hair
hard wet nipples
licks my back anxiously
penetrates me ferociously
until we both are
soaked in the juices of sex.
strong hands pulling my hair
hard wet nipples
licks my back anxiously
penetrates me ferociously
until we both are
soaked in the juices of sex.
Published 10th Mar 2014
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10th Mar 2014 3:07pm
10th Mar 2014 3:08pm
10th Mar 2014 6:23pm
Why I think this is hot n passionate
Especially the imagery of the two lovers 'marinating'
In their juices, evident of an amazing n wonderous
time of ecstasy! lol
Especially the imagery of the two lovers 'marinating'
In their juices, evident of an amazing n wonderous
time of ecstasy! lol
10th Mar 2014 7:12pm
10th Mar 2014 7:02pm
Concise, hot, erotic!
You write as if your pen is soaked in,
uh, um, ink. Yeah, that's it, must be ink. :D
You write as if your pen is soaked in,
uh, um, ink. Yeah, that's it, must be ink. :D
10th Mar 2014 7:13pm
10th Mar 2014 7:45pm
Love your first line, there's nothing like whispers in your ear to ignite the senses. Good imagery…great, juicy write!
SS333
SS333
10th Mar 2014 8:15pm
