Closer !!!

I've so enjoyed this. Really sensual and perfect words to share with someone special. Beautiful! :)

Glad you enjoyed ! Thanks Purple princess :) xoxo

Closer never felt so sensual! :) Lovely Brinda...Xo

Thanks a lot sweets :) xoxo

steip my souls strip my heart!
Sensually beautiful pen Brins.
Another great one ;)

Thank you kindly Angst !! :)

come a little closer- cage the elephant. Been listening to that? :D

Naah.. But I ll hear it for sure !

Interesting juxtaposition! You write "Next to my heart
the safest place....", but suggest it is you that could be in danger by "stripping your soul and heart".  

Thanks !! Glad you noticed that :)

Hello my friend; This is a work of art written down in words my friend, like your words, always have...
"Embracing my passion
          & tantalizing your style....
Come closest my spark...
  I ll strip my soul,
           And
         I ll strip my heart
for the dose of your
      Everlasting love charm.... "
Man, Lovin at its most Raw an passionate, I get that, an can dig that, its the way its meant to be, Lovin with ALL your heart an strength, its a Sagittarius thing, hehehe...
Also, I know that come closer song by cage the Elephant, other than "come a lil closer" this is Nothin like that, THIS is ALL ORIGINAL, an I know me songs, Great very well done song here darlin: Eddie

Thank you so much deadwolf :) This appreciation means a lot to me !! *Happy happy* xo

“Rough and wild hands found the bottom of the ocean
anyone can see your honesty from here.
the Hands  just never got tired.
the sea of freckles resting at the crest of her cheeks
    rose lips perma-pursed in half tilt
    her resting heart-rate so high that i could almost see it
         pirouetting within her chest
the dance of the waves  in saline water  ...
brought all its coloured lust
on  the tip of the Pichkari ...
 lets make everlasting HOLI...moist with Rangin passion...”

Thanks rupak(2) :) Your comments are always appreciated !

That is a powerful poem, Brinda! It's very brave to invite someone to come so close and you made that invitation to a sensual journey. Very touching!

Thanks a lot Miss Chi !!

never seen a sensual invitation, such pure way to express the inner feelings! how did I miss this poem for such long time :)

Better late than never ! haha

Glad you liked it

Really special

Thanks a lot :)