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A seed must
come completely
undone
for the
process
to even begin
Then
after
whats inside
comes out
a flower
begins
to sprout
Then
to continue
to grow
showers
and storms
will have to flow
and
through
the dirt
with the help of the
Son
This beautiful
process can be done
Does a flower not require rain
Grow through dirt
And desperately need the Son?
come completely
undone
for the
process
to even begin
Then
after
whats inside
comes out
a flower
begins
to sprout
Then
to continue
to grow
showers
and storms
will have to flow
and
through
the dirt
with the help of the
Son
This beautiful
process can be done
Does a flower not require rain
Grow through dirt
And desperately need the Son?
Published 9th Mar 2014
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9th Mar 2014 5:01am
That was... breathtaking.
I am in awe of your skill with the wording. I am particularly fond of sparse poetry, using as little words as possible to tell as much story.
The nature and life theme bring to mind hopeful springs and flourishing forms.
It spoke to me almost on a spiritual level.
I am in awe of your skill with the wording. I am particularly fond of sparse poetry, using as little words as possible to tell as much story.
The nature and life theme bring to mind hopeful springs and flourishing forms.
It spoke to me almost on a spiritual level.
9th Mar 2014 1:02pm
