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"Eve"
Nearly all know the answer
This question from long ago
The familiar reply repeated
But wrong, I'm about to show
Who was the first
carpenter in the land
It is not the man
most have in mind
Rather a woman
Eve and no other
She made Adam's
banana stand
This question from long ago
The familiar reply repeated
But wrong, I'm about to show
Who was the first
carpenter in the land
It is not the man
most have in mind
Rather a woman
Eve and no other
She made Adam's
banana stand
Published 5th Mar 2014
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5th Mar 2014 7:32pm
5th Mar 2014 9:30pm
Thank you! Appreciate your support.
Irreverent humor, though tongue-in-cheek, is offensive to some.
Oh, well, has yet to dissuade me. :)
Irreverent humor, though tongue-in-cheek, is offensive to some.
Oh, well, has yet to dissuade me. :)
5th Mar 2014 10:30pm
6th Mar 2014 00:21am
Thank you! Pleased to provide you a few laughs. :)
But, we both know, this is not the cause of your drooling issue. :D
But, we both know, this is not the cause of your drooling issue. :D
6th Mar 2014 1:01am
6th Mar 2014 1:15am
6th Mar 2014 1:34am
6th Mar 2014 3:49pm
Vegas you're such a clever poet always giving me a great laugh :) thank you with love and respect Crim
6th Mar 2014 6:52pm
Thank you! Your comments are always appreciated.
I believe humor is proper seasoning for the soul.
I believe humor is proper seasoning for the soul.
