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Captured in you
spiraling I fall
through the scented air
of your shimmering existence
Harnessed to your gaze
I am pulled into
the depth of your witness
Baptized in the love
of your sapphire ocean
accented in shades of redness
Swimming in a bath
of your endless affection
steaming from your wetness
Together in the abyss
of endless tears
flowing from our happiness
We submerge into the depths
of our souls
that keep us breathless
Forever inhaling
the whispers of our love
in complete togetherness
through the scented air
of your shimmering existence
Harnessed to your gaze
I am pulled into
the depth of your witness
Baptized in the love
of your sapphire ocean
accented in shades of redness
Swimming in a bath
of your endless affection
steaming from your wetness
Together in the abyss
of endless tears
flowing from our happiness
We submerge into the depths
of our souls
that keep us breathless
Forever inhaling
the whispers of our love
in complete togetherness
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Re: Captured in you
28th Feb 2014 4:31pm
Lovely poem.
I wonder about "shades of redness" - it made me think the eyes were crying. Was that your intention?
Thank you for the read.
I wonder about "shades of redness" - it made me think the eyes were crying. Was that your intention?
Thank you for the read.
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Re: Captured in you
28th Feb 2014 4:40pm
Thank you Tristique, your interpretation is sound and works, however it was not my thought. Reference to the ocean so keeping with the theme of a horizon, which is also the color of her makeup. Pic is a little off
Thank you for reading and commenting
Thank you for reading and commenting
Re: Captured in you
28th Feb 2014 4:52pm
Soul you are such an poetic artist painting magical scenes in my mind.. sublime ink :) much love Crim
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Re: Captured in you
28th Feb 2014 5:01pm
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Anonymous
28th Feb 2014 6:32pm
Very touching. I love how your words flow so beautifully together. Seemingly effortlessly.

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1st Mar 2014 00:19am
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28th Feb 2014 8:42pm
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Re: Captured in you
28th Feb 2014 9:30pm
Wow, this is such an eloquent poem ! And with such amazing lines of seduction."Baptized in the love of your sapphire ocean" love it, love it :)
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1st Mar 2014 00:21am
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2014 8:54pm
You captured beauty here. What a joy to read such splendor. Pic is great. Sets the colors off in the image of the write. Takes us to a mystic beautiful place. You write sexy, sensual and beauty all in one. RL for me. :)

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re: Re: Captured in you
3rd Mar 2014 9:06pm
Flowergirl, to receive such praises from the goddess of love poems means a lot, then to sit amongst the shelf of asteam writers you have collected is meaningful beyond words, thank you so much.
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5th Mar 2014 7:24am
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5th Mar 2014 1:08pm
Sweet Feenixfiles, you capture the write in it's beauty finding the roots of it's definition. Special people should be reminded of their impacts, what may not be good for there heart does not change what is good for oneself.
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7th May 2014 4:34am
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7th May 2014 6:28pm
Feelings of love and rapture wrapped into this piece... wonderful daily dose of inspiring ink. thank you for sharing...with deepest respect..domore
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7th May 2014 7:33pm