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my rose
and she spread her very stems..
lifted her petals..
exposing her thorns to scare..
she was unable to share..
not willing settle..
for he is her only gem..
lifted her petals..
exposing her thorns to scare..
she was unable to share..
not willing settle..
for he is her only gem..
Published 27th Feb 2014
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2014 3:12am
I love this! Indeed protect your beauty from all but the one that is yours forever. That you claim as yours.
28th Feb 2014 5:41pm
If i saw past myself I would claim much more. But I live a protected life and I'm guarded well.
Anonymous
28th Feb 2014 7:15pm
Guarded we all are in some way. Sometimes it's nice to let loose and free. I still enjoy this poem. Roses are my favorite flower, and you describe here so perfectly why I love them.
27th Feb 2014 12:49pm
Shhhhhh I sneaking. For ever letter must be silent. Every word provide shelter. For the world outside does not accept my views.
18th Mar 2014 6:35pm
I've read some of your poems and I like the way you write. Nice work :-)
18th Mar 2014 7:50pm
thanks comment and the reads.. as to my writing goes where my box lets me go..
