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Bathe Me
In one of my fantasies you are bathing with me
In a beautiful big bath tub surrounded by candle light
And sweet smelling oils and foamy bubbles
Such a blissful erotic urge to be bathed by you
I yearn to be bathed in your sweet smell and
Be electrified by the touch of your skin
Bathe me in the splendor of your great intellect and
The beauty of your amazing body
Caress me with the soapy sponge of your love
Let me be delighted by your strong tender hands
And the velvety softness of your exquisite mouth
Bathe me in the glory of your gorgeous erection
Pressing hard against me while letting your probing
Fingers glide in and out of my silky wetness
Please bathe my nipples in the lusciousness of
Your talented tongue and let your hot thirsty lips roam
All over my undulating and waiting body
while feeding me a taste of myself which I drink up eagerly
Let me be bathed in your touches, caresses, licks and kisses
Until we both can't take it anymore
And our moans and wimpers are echoing
Heavenly melodies back to us
I will bathe you as you have bathed me
Bodies drenched in the lovely elixir of our mingled cum
Dripping from everywhere
Bathe me baby bathe with me
Cum and have a bath with me ;)
In a beautiful big bath tub surrounded by candle light
And sweet smelling oils and foamy bubbles
Such a blissful erotic urge to be bathed by you
I yearn to be bathed in your sweet smell and
Be electrified by the touch of your skin
Bathe me in the splendor of your great intellect and
The beauty of your amazing body
Caress me with the soapy sponge of your love
Let me be delighted by your strong tender hands
And the velvety softness of your exquisite mouth
Bathe me in the glory of your gorgeous erection
Pressing hard against me while letting your probing
Fingers glide in and out of my silky wetness
Please bathe my nipples in the lusciousness of
Your talented tongue and let your hot thirsty lips roam
All over my undulating and waiting body
while feeding me a taste of myself which I drink up eagerly
Let me be bathed in your touches, caresses, licks and kisses
Until we both can't take it anymore
And our moans and wimpers are echoing
Heavenly melodies back to us
I will bathe you as you have bathed me
Bodies drenched in the lovely elixir of our mingled cum
Dripping from everywhere
Bathe me baby bathe with me
Cum and have a bath with me ;)
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Re: Bathe Me
Anonymous
26th Feb 2014 7:39pm
Wow..I read this slowly, soaking in each delectable word..this writing is simply dripping with intensity, I don't know where to start! Each perfectly hosed word (blissful, electrified, splendor, tender, velvety, exquisite, gorgeous) stoked the fires of passion hotter and hotter. Details like the strong, tender hands, a gorgeous erection pressing hard, probing and gliding fingers, nipples being bathed, drinking in oneself and the echoing of euphoric moans..wow! I love the finale, the image of being bathed in a mixture of each other's cum..what a sensual picture of true intimacy. This was literally dizzying to read! Brilliant piece! ;)
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re: Re: Bathe Me
26th Feb 2014 11:47pm
I am very happy that you thought so highly of my erotic
outpourings... ;) Since you last read it, I tweaked it with just a few words, and now I am very happy with the way it turned out, as it captures the atmosphere of my fantasy to a "T". It is extremely rewarding to have an erotic poem appreciated the way you have done with your comment, and I Iook forward to our continued exchange of "encouragement"... ;) ♡♡♡
outpourings... ;) Since you last read it, I tweaked it with just a few words, and now I am very happy with the way it turned out, as it captures the atmosphere of my fantasy to a "T". It is extremely rewarding to have an erotic poem appreciated the way you have done with your comment, and I Iook forward to our continued exchange of "encouragement"... ;) ♡♡♡
Re: Bathe Me
Anonymous
26th Feb 2014 8:42pm
Dang! How can he possibly resist such an invitation. Sensual sexy erotic piece you've written. Mmmmmm! Enjoyed this much. :)
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re: Re: Bathe Me
26th Feb 2014 11:40pm
Thank you, flowergirl. I hope when he reads this he will telepathically receive a mental picture from my poem of how much I crave this kind of beautiful blissful erotic union with him..... :)
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Re: Bathe Me
Anonymous
26th Feb 2014 8:44pm
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re: Re: Bathe Me
26th Feb 2014 11:37pm
Thank you for you wonderful feedback -- It is a great feeling when readers of my erotic poetry have such a steamy and sexy reaction to one of my poems..... ;)
Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 00:22am
Bathe me in the glory of your gorgeous erection
Pressing hard against me
while letting your probing Fingers
glide in and out
of my silky wetness
Please bathe my nipples
in the lusciousness of
Your talented tongue
and let your hot thirsty lips roam ....
exotic bathing
I too have an imagination
some time later
of bathing in cum and juices some
as human wine it becomes
Pressing hard against me
while letting your probing Fingers
glide in and out
of my silky wetness
Please bathe my nipples
in the lusciousness of
Your talented tongue
and let your hot thirsty lips roam ....
exotic bathing
I too have an imagination
some time later
of bathing in cum and juices some
as human wine it becomes
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:31pm
I like the analogy of cum and wine.......:)
Both can be such a pleasure to drink ;)
Thank you for your "tasty" comment. ♡♡♡
Both can be such a pleasure to drink ;)
Thank you for your "tasty" comment. ♡♡♡
re: re: Re: Bathe Me
1st Mar 2014 7:49am
I am a connoisseur of drinks
though I drink in moderation
but never tasted cum
may as u now say
may compare well with wine
I love
as u do suggest
though I drink in moderation
but never tasted cum
may as u now say
may compare well with wine
I love
as u do suggest
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Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 2:30am
Fffffffuuuuucccckkkkk!!! Wowzers I'm
Lightheaded from this erotically charged, blissfully sensual ink!!! One of your very best my dear! Lol
Lightheaded from this erotically charged, blissfully sensual ink!!! One of your very best my dear! Lol
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:29pm
Thank you for your delightful feedback! Being able to have you lightheaded and erotically charged from one of my poems.... Wow!!! It's truly a great compliment coming from you and hearing your praise has made my day!.... ;) ♡♡♡
Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 4:07am
A super sexy treasure trove of sensual, erotic, tasty images. You got a rise out of me :)
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:33pm
Happy to have gotten a "rise" out of you in such a sexy way and happy to be of service with my erotica.... ;) ♡♡♡
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28th Feb 2014 10:03pm
Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 6:50am
re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:36pm
Thank you very much..... it is nice to know I described one of your fantasies in this poem and to know that you loved it......;)
Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 4:52pm
I'm ready sweets!!LOL!!
Awesomely sexy piece!!
Love the flow!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesomely sexy piece!!
Love the flow!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:40pm
I am pretty happy with the way it turned out and that so many people have responded positively to it including you....
Flow is important so I am happy you enjoyed the "flow" ;)
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Flow is important so I am happy you enjoyed the "flow" ;)
♡♡♡
Re: Bathe Me
27th Feb 2014 11:55pm
Utterly intoxicating. If poetry could be an erotic drug this would be it. Seductive and descriptive, every line pulls the reader in more and more. This was a gorgeous and a romantically sexy poem. Keep that writing hand strong my poetic friend.
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:48pm
Your comment is very flattering and it makes me happy that you thought so highly of it -- I will try to write more poems for you that are equally as seductive ... ;) ♡♡♡
Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 5:02pm
Water is so erotic...then you add oils and soap and it all becomes slippery and more erotic!
This ink is incredibly hot! Thank you for it.
This ink is incredibly hot! Thank you for it.
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re: Re: Bathe Me
28th Feb 2014 6:45pm
You are welcome and thank you for reading my poem snd commenting on it. It is one of my favorite fantasies -- there is just something about bathing together that is incredibly erotic especially if you add oils, candles, bubbles and such.
Speaking of bubbles, Champagne fits very well into this fantasy also..... ;) ♡♡♡
Speaking of bubbles, Champagne fits very well into this fantasy also..... ;) ♡♡♡
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14th Mar 2014 9:52pm
Re: Bathe Me
15th Sep 2014 7:06am
The use of the imperative tense "bathe me" has a way of putting me on edge of action. It makes me really want to be that guy in that poem. For example, "Please bathe my nipples in the lusciousness of
Your talented tongue and let your hot thirsty lips roam". It gives so much liberty to this "you" that I can easily take for myself (nice use of "you" by the way). It puts opportunity in front of my mind and fills me with a desire to do every single thing you command this guy to do. The first time that I have read an erotic poem with the environment imagery as a bathtub, but I have got to put everything mentioned here in my "to do" list. That is one amazing ability of an erotic writer. She can give a person a fantasy or a nice erotic idea to try with his/her companion. This might have been an idea that they might have passed over, but when you describe it in this way, you show that sexuality can surge from any experience and place. Excellent!
Your talented tongue and let your hot thirsty lips roam". It gives so much liberty to this "you" that I can easily take for myself (nice use of "you" by the way). It puts opportunity in front of my mind and fills me with a desire to do every single thing you command this guy to do. The first time that I have read an erotic poem with the environment imagery as a bathtub, but I have got to put everything mentioned here in my "to do" list. That is one amazing ability of an erotic writer. She can give a person a fantasy or a nice erotic idea to try with his/her companion. This might have been an idea that they might have passed over, but when you describe it in this way, you show that sexuality can surge from any experience and place. Excellent!
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