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Eliminate
Ponderances of rehearsed lines...
Expressions of thoughts and desires...
ohhh so neatly described
and
forthcoming...in my mind.
The reality of above said lines...
that is different.
Once the space of
time,
distractions,
and
place are closed...
Then the remarkably
eloquently expressive
seductive, wanton, lustful
becomes
Quiet...
Silent...
Simply requesting by looks
to have that space...
Eliminated.
To have
YOU.
Expressions of thoughts and desires...
ohhh so neatly described
and
forthcoming...in my mind.
The reality of above said lines...
that is different.
Once the space of
time,
distractions,
and
place are closed...
Then the remarkably
eloquently expressive
seductive, wanton, lustful
becomes
Quiet...
Silent...
Simply requesting by looks
to have that space...
Eliminated.
To have
YOU.
Published 25th Feb 2014
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27th Feb 2014 11:56am
27th Feb 2014 12:47pm
7th Mar 2014 2:04am
The message, the design, the word selection,... oh what a gem!:) Rain loves this....xo
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17th Mar 2014 2:49pm
17th Mar 2014 2:52pm
You are so kind! Thanks!! There are lots of great ones here on the sight so happy readings and creating!
7th Apr 2014 3:33pm
7th Apr 2014 3:34pm
25th Jan 2016 5:34am
Makes me think of the many many moments of anticipating, relating, rehearsing, deciding and reversing, and then juuuuuuuust letting those thoughts escape from just a gaze when close in.
26th Jan 2016 1:18pm
The moment you finally stop the rehearsing and etc..and escape......priceless!
