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Against the wall
Against the wall,
I still pinned you,
Although finished, we both were,
As you first moved to,
Slide down,
Kissing first one nipple,
And then the other,
My navel,
Explored with your tongue,
And my hair parted soon after,
With that same tongue,
Working its way,
Down to,
And along my shaft,
To its tip,
Where after some gentle tasting,
Your lips surrounded,
Enclosed,
And swallowed me,
So that I moved in and out,
Of you mouth,
Until you had,
What little I still had to offer,
After what we had,
Climaxed shortly before.
I still pinned you,
Although finished, we both were,
As you first moved to,
Slide down,
Kissing first one nipple,
And then the other,
My navel,
Explored with your tongue,
And my hair parted soon after,
With that same tongue,
Working its way,
Down to,
And along my shaft,
To its tip,
Where after some gentle tasting,
Your lips surrounded,
Enclosed,
And swallowed me,
So that I moved in and out,
Of you mouth,
Until you had,
What little I still had to offer,
After what we had,
Climaxed shortly before.
Published 24th Feb 2014
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24th Feb 2014 11:15pm
It’s most sensitive
to extract the last drop,
after all has been squeezed out
it makes ones sides tickle...
with joy
as the last drop is just sucked away
and
sweetness surrounds once again
in the final
thank you kiss
a lovely perfume
and
love soon resumes
as that is all
to the scent
of a woman
25th Feb 2014 3:47pm
Excellent! Perfect image/comment. I appreciate it and the time it took to create it. Thank you!
Jay
Jay
25th Feb 2014 4:12pm
5th Mar 2014 4:31pm
5th Mar 2014 9:03pm
Your comment, in light of what I've read of your work, says much.
Thank you!
Jay
Thank you!
Jay
