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On the subject of Failure
As one falls
They learn to stand
Learn through failure
And repremand
There has never been man
Without defeat
Experienced sailors
Don't sail smooth seas
They learn to stand
Learn through failure
And repremand
There has never been man
Without defeat
Experienced sailors
Don't sail smooth seas
Published 28th Feb 2011
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28th Feb 2011 5:20am
All of us have had failure in our lives, but how you react to it, is what determines your success.
28th Feb 2011 1:38pm
...needs a bit more kick for me. Also, small tense issue at the start...first line talks about one person, then line two talks about lots of people...just a bit confusing really, and felt a little like someone trying to use 'poet' language...
