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I dont deserve
I love you baby girl
Always have always will
Stay with me forever
And let me love you right
I know I dont deserve you
That you deserve so much more
But I will try my hardest
To show you the love you deserve
But if I cant
Know Ive tried
To love you right
Always have always will
Stay with me forever
And let me love you right
I know I dont deserve you
That you deserve so much more
But I will try my hardest
To show you the love you deserve
But if I cant
Know Ive tried
To love you right
Published 24th Feb 2014
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8th Mar 2014 2:26am
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13th Apr 2014 7:57pm
Nicely written, it puts an umph into an overused cliche, which, in turn, removes the negativity of the fact you chose to write about a cliche subject. All in all, a good read.
14th Apr 2014 1:09am
