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On vacation - Senryu
Not for very long
I'm on vacation and gone
Soon be back again
:-)
I'm on vacation and gone
Soon be back again
:-)
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 21st Feb 2014
| Edited 22nd Feb 2014
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Re: On vacation - Senryu
21st Feb 2014 11:23pm
lol ... Enjoy yourself ... collect great memories to create great ink
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
21st Feb 2014 11:31pm
Hehe, I'll do LSP! Wild beasts are waiting for my camera and me! My first haiku sprouted in Namibia ... will never forget that. It was the beginning of my poetry writing. Thanks for the kind wishes!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
21st Feb 2014 11:41pm
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22nd Feb 2014 00:30am
Re: On vacation - Senryu
21st Feb 2014 11:44pm
it's good to get away
I had a way once
which didn't work
for a while
that was the point, i guess..:)
I had a way once
which didn't work
for a while
that was the point, i guess..:)
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 00:31am
A poem as a reply, I'm smitten with that! Yeah, it's good to get away ... See you soon!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 00:32am
Ha! That I didn't know! Godspeed! Great word! Thank you, Hashman, will miss you all!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 4:19am
Safari time! You enjoy that Miss Chi. Remember, hunt anything you want, but only kill what you're going to eat. Think there's a msg in that for all of us. Haha! Keep you're camera sights up! I envy you. Beautiful country. All power Miss Chi.
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 8:47am
Twitch! I'd never kill innocent souls! Only shoot the furried sweeties with my camera :-). I'll be only hunting for the right words for some new poems!
From the bottom of my heart I thank you for your good wishes. Take care of yourself!
From the bottom of my heart I thank you for your good wishes. Take care of yourself!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 9:23am
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22nd Feb 2014 2:33pm
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 12:50pm
Oh shit I'm sooooo jealous! oh well at least bring back so e amazing photos please! lol... Be safe sweetheart n have fun :)
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 2:33pm
Thanks dear Poe! I will and I will show fotos as well as new poems! Wish you a happy time!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 4:20pm
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9th Mar 2014 5:39pm
Thank you so much sweet Sarah! I had tons of fun and were able to relax entirely.
Re: On vacation - Senryu
22nd Feb 2014 7:40pm
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15th Mar 2014 11:11pm
Re: On vacation - Senryu
Anonymous
27th Feb 2014 7:10am
Hope you're enjoying your vacation Ms Chi, you are missed at Du, hope to see you soon.
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
15th Mar 2014 11:13pm
Thanks for missing me! I missed you, too! And yes, I enjoyed my vacation since the (grown up) children accompanied us! That was great!
Re: On vacation - Senryu
4th Mar 2014 8:59pm
I hope you are having a wonderful time…capturing much beauty to fill your lens and your heart..look forward to seeing what your time away has surfaced to bring us the gift of your words on your return!! Be well !!
Missing You,
JeJe
Missing You,
JeJe
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re: Re: On vacation - Senryu
15th Mar 2014 11:18pm
Ah, JeJe! Knowing that you love to take pictures, too, I'm convinced you'd love the African landscape and spirit, too! Missed you, too!