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Limbo (3 word inspiration/previous forum post)

I can see the mare galloping in the distance
I can see the wind blowing through the grass
In a beautiful sea of green and gold
But i cannot feel it
I cannot breathe it in
The movement is false
disappointment stabs me
Like a needle to the heart
I look all around searching for your face
I scream your name but you cannot hear me
Im all alone
In limbo...
Written by kerriesweets210 (Sweets210)
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