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eat u up
TONIGHT I WANNA EAT U UP
I DONT HAVE TO TAKE MY CLOTHES OFF
U DONT HAVE TO EITHER
HELL I DONT EVEN CARE IF I GO SOFT
I WANT MY MOUTH ON YA PUSSY
MY TONGUE WORKIN YA CLIT
I WANNA MAKE U MOAN LOUD BABY
MAKE U CUSS N SCREAM OUT "SHIT"
FEEL YA THIGHS QUIVERING HARD
MAKE YA PUSSY HAVE INTERNAL SPASMS
IMA LEAVE MY NAME ON YA WALLS
IMA GIVE U A REAL ORGASM
UR HANDS WILL BE GRIPPIN THE SHEETS
YA HANDS RUBBIN ALL IN MY HAIR
THE WAY IMA MAKE U CUM
TO THE OTHER NIGGAS IT JUS AINT FAIR
U GONE CUM HARDER THEN EVER BABY
MY TONGUES GONE LICC N LICC LONGER[/font]
MY MOUTH WILL DEVOUR YO JUICY FLOW
U GONE CUM STRONGER N STRONGER
IMA EAT YO PUSSY FOR HOURS N HOURS
U CANT HELP BUT TO ERUPT
I JUS WANNA EAT YO PUSSY BABY
SO DO U MIND IF I JUS EAT U UP?[/font]
I DONT HAVE TO TAKE MY CLOTHES OFF
U DONT HAVE TO EITHER
HELL I DONT EVEN CARE IF I GO SOFT
I WANT MY MOUTH ON YA PUSSY
MY TONGUE WORKIN YA CLIT
I WANNA MAKE U MOAN LOUD BABY
MAKE U CUSS N SCREAM OUT "SHIT"
FEEL YA THIGHS QUIVERING HARD
MAKE YA PUSSY HAVE INTERNAL SPASMS
IMA LEAVE MY NAME ON YA WALLS
IMA GIVE U A REAL ORGASM
UR HANDS WILL BE GRIPPIN THE SHEETS
YA HANDS RUBBIN ALL IN MY HAIR
THE WAY IMA MAKE U CUM
TO THE OTHER NIGGAS IT JUS AINT FAIR
U GONE CUM HARDER THEN EVER BABY
MY TONGUES GONE LICC N LICC LONGER[/font]
MY MOUTH WILL DEVOUR YO JUICY FLOW
U GONE CUM STRONGER N STRONGER
IMA EAT YO PUSSY FOR HOURS N HOURS
U CANT HELP BUT TO ERUPT
I JUS WANNA EAT YO PUSSY BABY
SO DO U MIND IF I JUS EAT U UP?[/font]
Published 25th Feb 2011
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25th Feb 2011 2:03am
...what crap. You have mistaken the dribble that is pumped out by recording executives on to the great unwashed as art, and then copied its style in the worst possible way.
For christs sake read a book...even a book of nursery rhymes would have more literary merit than that pile of shit that was fobbed off as a song, that you have taken for inspiration...you have left me weeping in the streets for the future of both music and poetry...I may not survive the night.
Here's an idea...listen to some Leonard Cohen for a real poet making words into music, and then think for about twenty years about what the music industry has done to your brain through 20000 hours of pop music...
For christs sake read a book...even a book of nursery rhymes would have more literary merit than that pile of shit that was fobbed off as a song, that you have taken for inspiration...you have left me weeping in the streets for the future of both music and poetry...I may not survive the night.
Here's an idea...listen to some Leonard Cohen for a real poet making words into music, and then think for about twenty years about what the music industry has done to your brain through 20000 hours of pop music...
literally vomiting after reading this (no pun intended!) It's not sexy at all, it's just disgusting. Ugh! Trash talk on its finest.
