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Hey, Gabi, my valentine
Hey, Gabi, my valentine
Our hands intertwine
In our nice clandestine
Intimity, as underline
In a poem very sibylline
Hey, Gabi, my valentine
I am not a porcupine
Really, too much asinine
No more truly elephantine
I am just your valentine
Hey, Gabi, my valentine
I love you not only today
Each second, all the day
I love you really anywhere
But sure, I love you forever
Published 13th Feb 2014
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14th Feb 2014 6:22am
14th Feb 2014 8:33am
Oh, yes, absinthe, I forgot to use in my poem
turpentine
alkaline
opaline
or
caroline
clementine
columbine
concubine
Funny comment, I like it. Thank you for reading and commenting my poems!
turpentine
alkaline
opaline
or
caroline
clementine
columbine
concubine
Funny comment, I like it. Thank you for reading and commenting my poems!
14th Feb 2014 9:14am
Hey!!!! You know these words you've just enumerated is a little bit like that Jumbo program. :)
When I started reading about Jumbo, I also started to understand better some of the poems here on DUP!
:)
When I started reading about Jumbo, I also started to understand better some of the poems here on DUP!
:)
14th Feb 2014 9:30am
When I write a poem with rhyme, I search all the words which could make a rhyme with the subject and it is eften very funny to make such list! And to associate words in the poem. No, I am not a Jumbo program!
