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memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
there's a fatman wearin an
elephant-suit'cause yknow he
never forgets
never forgets
& that, dear friends, keeps'im
weeping weeping
sweeping up elephant poop[shit]
fo'god'n'cuntry
to prove to hisself he be still
alive & in good high awemighty bliss....tis
a great
paradoxy[moronian] lesson for trembling upright
citizens projecting the glory
of our every hubris........'nobody knows th'trouble
eye seen' by sevenbillion
& so much more....
still[+]all,
can never let it just happen,leave it 'be'
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dkzk\paradoxymoronPOOMS+objec'd'arteFOOTOOsO'rignale
elephant-suit'cause yknow he
never forgets
never forgets
& that, dear friends, keeps'im
weeping weeping
sweeping up elephant poop[shit]
fo'god'n'cuntry
to prove to hisself he be still
alive & in good high awemighty bliss....tis
a great
paradoxy[moronian] lesson for trembling upright
citizens projecting the glory
of our every hubris........'nobody knows th'trouble
eye seen' by sevenbillion
& so much more....
still[+]all,
can never let it just happen,leave it 'be'
_____________________________________________________
dkzk\paradoxymoronPOOMS+objec'd'arteFOOTOOsO'rignale
Written by
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
Published 13th Feb 2014
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Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
13th Feb 2014 4:00pm
No need for the sugar; I'd take out poop and leave shit bracketless, but I know you'll not. [winky]
Riddled with gems here, especially the upright tremblers. Wish I was old, then I'da thought of that.
Riddled with gems here, especially the upright tremblers. Wish I was old, then I'da thought of that.
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re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
13th Feb 2014 4:22pm
ah, alpie....so good t'see yr moniker com'menting.
don't wish you were 'old'... only compulsive liars & deny'errs, & the good folks who market to & profit from extending their decrepitance unto suffering make it seem like it's worth it. My 'reward' for 'surviving' my death at 48yrsold was a bizarre pariahood & an equally bizarre compulsion to 'create' as much virtually useless spontaneous bad art as possible everyday....combined wit decreasing ability stop the paralyzing effect of 'seeing/feeling' the manner of thinking in real people, theirs masks unto themselves to maintain disawareness of 'self', &bla,blabla....
how ever....wishin y'd'a thought of that is a great compliment for which what-is-left-of-me does deep appreciate.
bless ye, Danny
PS: my use of word 'poop' has nothing to do wit either sugar or politeness....it's mainly a reminder that wee ne'er 'outgrow' our infantility. Ha!
don't wish you were 'old'... only compulsive liars & deny'errs, & the good folks who market to & profit from extending their decrepitance unto suffering make it seem like it's worth it. My 'reward' for 'surviving' my death at 48yrsold was a bizarre pariahood & an equally bizarre compulsion to 'create' as much virtually useless spontaneous bad art as possible everyday....combined wit decreasing ability stop the paralyzing effect of 'seeing/feeling' the manner of thinking in real people, theirs masks unto themselves to maintain disawareness of 'self', &bla,blabla....
how ever....wishin y'd'a thought of that is a great compliment for which what-is-left-of-me does deep appreciate.
bless ye, Danny
PS: my use of word 'poop' has nothing to do wit either sugar or politeness....it's mainly a reminder that wee ne'er 'outgrow' our infantility. Ha!
Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
13th Feb 2014 4:39pm
oh yes....
I hadda smack them rather that letting them smack me for the
'desired artistic effect'.....
I hadda smack them rather that letting them smack me for the
'desired artistic effect'.....
Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
ah, the need to believe
we're somehow worthwhile,
the elephant in the room,
hereafter known as the
poop deck...
we're somehow worthwhile,
the elephant in the room,
hereafter known as the
poop deck...
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re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
14th Feb 2014 4:56am
no shit, man.
our beliefins is some whoppin elephantine poops.
godd bless mr Dart
Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
15th Feb 2014 11:53pm
memoir of compassion, liar, lair your just putting your poopy old man pants on fire on my stoop cause we can't no matter young nor old depends on nothing to depend but nothing so why you ring the bell and run off weepy weeping to with punctuation like buddha's awakening sticks, thwackedee wack wack the daddy won't let all we supposed me's sleep in the dojo of selfie(see eye(I) see me so many so many times refined or splish splash taken' a bath in the manufactured waves of (we ain't even me's ti be we a wees to have an our, right?) satorial delusions
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re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
16th Feb 2014 5:33am
ha,[ha?]
wellsaid grasshopper.....
sartorial satori
all around....every body
needs a hobby, butt
i'll change my depends
so's t'be ready for the
next
load
re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
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re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
Anonymous
16th Feb 2014 2:34pm
Oh good grief, Semaj. If you hadn't commented about "your stoop" here, I would have never ever thought this poem was about you. You just drew your name on the shovel of shit here, dear, when you "stooped" by for the slap. Could have been done in private mail.
Love to you BOTH.
Love to you BOTH.
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re: re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
It not about me more than any other, dada laid this on everyone's metaphorical stoop and I like all the news he throws on the porch really I do believe I don't have a belief about it one way or another I just making a mess of my meanings trying to play in the manure of understanding and now I'm a bit scarred dada and I are about to have the first ever shooting attributed to a beef that was meant to be a shared meal of absurdist truths but maybe he or I will get the kids to wear airbrushed t- shirts to remember the martyred
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re: re: re: Re: memoir of compassion in thee world of make-a-believe
16th Feb 2014 5:29pm
yo sema & other compatriots......tis all good'n'well, maybe even hunky dory....
to keep my heart a'beating, all such perceived 'slights' MUST be turned some kind of neutral humor...& the more egregious must be forgiven in advance, BEFORE anything hits the proverbial Fan../..anger is the dubious luxury of the normal, real people...tis poison to all, but I think
I think I think, for 'artists', indulging/participating in arenas of anger are that much more self-destructive......maybe thas' why you rarely see my moniker in the Forum & Competition pages of this DUP of ours......