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To my Valentine
To my
sexy smart and gorgeous Valentine
I ask if you still will be mine
keeping our blessed love divine
and our desire and pleasure equally as fine
forevermore and eternity
like the brightest star
for all to see
much like the color gold
so strong and so bold
and like the deepest ocean
overflowing with mutual devotion
sharing our emotion
sweet like honey lotion
so please say yes
don't make me guess
around you my heart
is full of bliss
sexy smart and gorgeous Valentine
I ask if you still will be mine
keeping our blessed love divine
and our desire and pleasure equally as fine
forevermore and eternity
like the brightest star
for all to see
much like the color gold
so strong and so bold
and like the deepest ocean
overflowing with mutual devotion
sharing our emotion
sweet like honey lotion
so please say yes
don't make me guess
around you my heart
is full of bliss
Published 13th Feb 2014
| Edited 15th Feb 2014
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13th Feb 2014 5:01pm
15th Feb 2014 6:34am
I really hope he likes my poem.....!
Thank you for your comment........... :)
Thank you for your comment........... :)
13th Feb 2014 8:04pm
Aaaaawwwww soooooo sweet this is!
Who wouldn't say yes to this lovingly spilled ink?
Awesome Valentine's piece my dear :)
Who wouldn't say yes to this lovingly spilled ink?
Awesome Valentine's piece my dear :)
15th Feb 2014 6:35am
It means a lot to me that you enjoyed my valentine ink spill......... ;)
Anonymous
14th Feb 2014 00:59am
How he can resist such luving words. Very sensual write. :)
15th Feb 2014 6:37am
Thank you, flowergirl. I hope he feels the same way you do......... :) <3
16th Feb 2014 00:04am
Thank you for liking my Valentine poem.....
I really hope he likes it as much as you do -- Thank you for the encouragement... :)
I really hope he likes it as much as you do -- Thank you for the encouragement... :)
16th Feb 2014 2:36am
16th Feb 2014 6:55am
16th Feb 2014 6:34pm
Had me curious the whole time to find out if the description was going to stick with gold or maybe expand to red (Valentines) or even blue (the ocean)
18th Feb 2014 6:32am
Glad to have gotten you so curious and hopefully enjoying my Valentine's poem.... :) Thank you for your feedback. It is always much appreciated.
18th Feb 2014 4:11pm
19th Feb 2014 6:20am
