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Anonymous
11th Feb 2014 9:18pm
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Yes, join the choir, Gabriel. Thank you for your sexy comment and the lips! Cool!
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12th Feb 2014 9:02am
12th Feb 2014 2:02pm
This would be the site for new ground. Reality or fantasy, it doesn't really matter. It's the thoughts that count.
Have fun, break out, if you dare ....
Have fun, break out, if you dare ....
12th Feb 2014 7:29pm
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11th Feb 2014 11:16pm
Perhaps? Don't know who said that, but it's so true:
Minds are like parachutes. They only function when they're open.
I'm about to open up. Perhaps :-). Thank you so much for your warm and welcome comment!
Minds are like parachutes. They only function when they're open.
I'm about to open up. Perhaps :-). Thank you so much for your warm and welcome comment!
12th Feb 2014 1:06am
12th Feb 2014 9:04am
You do? That makes me glad and I appreciate your nice comments always, J.! Thank you so much!
12th Feb 2014 4:16am
12th Feb 2014 9:22am
Thanks a lot, girlundone. I'm glad it creates something in you. That's why we write, isn't it?
Anonymous
12th Feb 2014 4:28am
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12th Feb 2014 9:24am
Humbled by your words, BoltUpright! Thanks for stopping by and leaving this kind comment. Appreciate it much!
12th Feb 2014 4:49am
I really like this because it leaves the definition of what the triangle is up to the reader. On a wider scope it could be mind, body and soul ... On a more finite level it could be the trinity of her body only her lover knows, and that trinity certainly varies from woman to woman ...
Sexy ink.
Sexy ink.
12th Feb 2014 9:28am
As you are the haiku/senryu expert I'm humbled by your lovely comment, LSP! You master your own double entendre pieces so expertly that I know you will read mine without difficulties. There's more to a simple triangle/trinity, yes :-). Thank you so much!
12th Feb 2014 5:34am
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12th Feb 2014 9:49am
... Which leaves the nature of 'something' up to each of us. Glad you feel me, John.
Anonymous
12th Feb 2014 6:25am
This certainly triggers the imagination Ms. Chi, of what is literal and what is figurative.
or perhaps I should just breathe in the sensuality and let my imagination run free.
or perhaps I should just breathe in the sensuality and let my imagination run free.
12th Feb 2014 9:53am
Just breathe and feel it, Vee. The rest will be left to your imagination :-). That's the good thing about poetry: Each of us can bath in his own imagenery and fantasies. Thanks for your kind comment, Vee, always!
12th Feb 2014 7:26am
It's the only way to go Miss Chi. This just oozes with sexual goodness. Soak in it Miss C.
12th Feb 2014 10:07am
I will, dear Twitch, I will. Always glad about your warm words! Thank you for being here ...
Anonymous
12th Feb 2014 8:16am
Beautiful, sensual riddle, like an oracle of sorts!
12th Feb 2014 10:15am
WOW! That's quite a different approach to the 'Triangle' and I'm thrilled by that angle of perception. Love it, Le Fay!
12th Feb 2014 10:53am
12th Feb 2014 10:56am
Nice of you to put it this way! The other way round it would have made sense, too :-). Thanks for he refreshing comment, whale!
Yes, it's true. Minds should be open to all directions. Means one should be open to others, too. Multidirectional, so to speak. Thanks for the comment, again.
Perhaps we should simply start over.
Perhaps we should simply start over.
29th Aug 2017 8:11pm
29th Aug 2017 10:16pm
It's three years that I wrote it. Have I started over? I think I just continued ...
30th Aug 2017 2:30am
no i had 350 oldies unanswered so i am just clearing the junkies fresh ones will then be cummming shortenly
12th Feb 2014 2:15pm
Mmmmm you had me with "lips to lips"
the rest I'm trying to recall lol...jk, fantastic
stuff lady :)
the rest I'm trying to recall lol...jk, fantastic
stuff lady :)
12th Feb 2014 8:33pm
Hehe! To each his own fantasy and interpretation! Can I say so?
Glad you like it! Thanks for everything, babe!
Glad you like it! Thanks for everything, babe!
16th Feb 2014 5:55pm
Ironic, how the triangle is one of
the most stablest of structures...
until it isn't...
the most stablest of structures...
until it isn't...
16th Feb 2014 6:21pm
Exceptions prove the rule :-).
Some triangles tend to be vulnerable.
Thanks, J.!
Some triangles tend to be vulnerable.
Thanks, J.!
21st Feb 2014 7:19pm
Sensual piece Ms. Chi!!!
Kisses for the vertical smile!!
Awesome!!
Sir Lancelott
Kisses for the vertical smile!!
Awesome!!
Sir Lancelott
21st Feb 2014 10:54pm
Exactly! Glad you find it sensuous and thanks for your lovely words :-). I love your creation of the term 'vertical smile'!
