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Feeling Blue
Feeling Blue
Unknown why I’m feeling blue
floods drown
hypoxia noticeable
asphyxiate bliss
breathing none, no perfume
dizzy circles float
organ pipes blow and flail
salty chlorine stings
leather belt noose tightening
manicured nails scratch
lovely softness pets
blacking consciousness
heavy lockets worn with posture
face gleams azure
fainting fulfilled
sleep now
fishes and father roaches
Unknown why I’m feeling blue
floods drown
hypoxia noticeable
asphyxiate bliss
breathing none, no perfume
dizzy circles float
organ pipes blow and flail
salty chlorine stings
leather belt noose tightening
manicured nails scratch
lovely softness pets
blacking consciousness
heavy lockets worn with posture
face gleams azure
fainting fulfilled
sleep now
fishes and father roaches
Published 11th Feb 2014
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11th Feb 2014 7:53pm
Great
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Oh how I love this instant stalker option of following the poet o.o so convenient
12th Feb 2014 3:33pm
great writing
epic depiction of everything surrounding that seems to be a further culprit of the world swallowing up the individual
loved it
epic depiction of everything surrounding that seems to be a further culprit of the world swallowing up the individual
loved it
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 3:12am
loved it!! sorry i havent been on in awhile:( im gonna try to get on more.
