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the storm
Your mood somtimes reminds me of a storm ,slowly brewing untill there's a violent explosion of thunder ,and the lightning strikes down around me as my soul curls up in a ball and u rain on me, as the coldness from your words stabbes in to my heart like a 1000 daggers ,as I feel the eyes of the storm piercing thro me , I feel alone
Published 10th Feb 2014
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11th Feb 2014 5:51am
Great poem and thank you for reading my poem entitled Cocaine Avenue I appreciate your feedback
