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supermarket day dream (or TILL there was you...)
the girl in front of
me at the check out
her smile...
me at the check out
her smile...
Published 9th Feb 2014
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10th Feb 2014 11:52am
10th Feb 2014 12:28pm
yes...they
all
ways smiling at me ,
yet
inviably as to one
invisible unto
unviability...........or
some
such, yknow?
all
ways smiling at me ,
yet
inviably as to one
invisible unto
unviability...........or
some
such, yknow?
10th Feb 2014 8:16pm
Paul - Sometimes all it takes is a smile from a stranger to change the whole day. Intriguing write. Namyh
11th Feb 2014 8:19pm
12th Feb 2014 00:36am
