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Whip
Lashing my back,
Arching in pleasure.
He's taking it serious,
Extreme measures.
Down cracks a whip
Causing me to drip.
He purrs and strokes
And stokes my fire with pokes.
With a tongue
Like an extinguisher
He licks at my spark.
Down again cracks the whip,
I inhale so sharp.
Arching in pleasure.
He's taking it serious,
Extreme measures.
Down cracks a whip
Causing me to drip.
He purrs and strokes
And stokes my fire with pokes.
With a tongue
Like an extinguisher
He licks at my spark.
Down again cracks the whip,
I inhale so sharp.
Published 9th Feb 2014
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9th Feb 2014 9:59pm
9th Feb 2014 11:11pm
Write when you're feeling the most....intense. That's where my better one's come from. I appreciate the compliment, but hush. We always seem to like the style of others better than ourselves. Thanks for reading, Circa!
10th Feb 2014 2:33am
10th Feb 2014 11:27am
10th Feb 2014 2:53am
That was HOT Madi!!!!
Had me here drooling!!Lmao!!
Great write sweets!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Had me here drooling!!Lmao!!
Great write sweets!!!!
Sir Lancelott
10th Feb 2014 11:26am
orgasmic screams echo from the end of his whips
before both hands dig into her wanting hips
slapping her own clit while he make penetration
pounding his whore into sweet submission
Intriguing read, Always interesting when the reader is left to imagine their own ending. Nice inking
before both hands dig into her wanting hips
slapping her own clit while he make penetration
pounding his whore into sweet submission
Intriguing read, Always interesting when the reader is left to imagine their own ending. Nice inking
10th Feb 2014 7:26pm
You've got quite the way with words. Im glad you let your imagination finish on this piece! Thank you for all of your replies. I hope to see more ;)
