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Liquid~Vapor
Dip into my liquid world
Your lips taste parched
I'll regenerate you
You evaporate me
Your lips taste parched
I'll regenerate you
You evaporate me
Published 7th Feb 2014
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7th Feb 2014 4:07am
Tommie you are a mind reader!! I am thirty and hell right now, you always regenerate me with each line. U da bomb girl!
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7th Feb 2014 4:41pm
I like this Tommie because it can be interpreted in so many ways. A bottle of whiskey perhaps or sensual bliss. Well done!
7th Feb 2014 4:42pm
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7th Feb 2014 7:50pm
dat's sum reel suckin' ladee Rm
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