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You
There was nothing I needed more
than knowing that you’re there,
the big cuddle and your whispered words
“I’m not going anywhere”
I've never let anyone in so close
and somehow you've gotten through.
You’re seeing parts of me I don’t share
But I’m doing so with you...
I don’t know how to explain this
the warm feeling that you leave.
All I know is that I’m deeply taken with
You, my gentleman named Steve.
than knowing that you’re there,
the big cuddle and your whispered words
“I’m not going anywhere”
I've never let anyone in so close
and somehow you've gotten through.
You’re seeing parts of me I don’t share
But I’m doing so with you...
I don’t know how to explain this
the warm feeling that you leave.
All I know is that I’m deeply taken with
You, my gentleman named Steve.
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6th Feb 2014 7:06am
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6th Feb 2014 9:58am
Its a new feeling... I'm very lucky to have him.
Thank you for your comments x
Thank you for your comments x
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6th Feb 2014 10:20am
keep him! keep each other!
otherwise you will take great pains to invent him in others ...
otherwise you will take great pains to invent him in others ...
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6th Feb 2014 1:41pm
Beautiful and powerful write Glass
You're getting closer to the core where the sun bursts through revealing the magic of love ...
You're getting closer to the core where the sun bursts through revealing the magic of love ...
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6th Feb 2014 11:22pm
Thank you Sir, nothing like a big hurdle when you first start seeing someone and the freaked out feeling that follows...
Re: You
9th Feb 2014 8:47pm
Ooh Heart of Glass so beautiful. I love ur vulnerability so beautiful. I love how u write
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10th Feb 2014 00:06am
hehe yes... I don't know how I feel about being this vulnerable, you won't know the full extent of someone's feelings if you don't take the risk x
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