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Lovely poet woman
Lovely poet woman
I should thank you
for instilling me
with subtlety
and
words sublime,
else my mouth was like vinegar
not warm red wine,
you do poetry
and
its nuances define
with me that's very fine
women are a golden mine
with deeper ravines
and
fathomless spears
can enter
and tear
yet women do not wear
they endear
the thrusts and all
why did god make
a woman after all
for the whole purpose
to receive the water fall
and
then produce a lovely snowfall
I should thank you
for instilling me
with subtlety
and
words sublime,
else my mouth was like vinegar
not warm red wine,
you do poetry
and
its nuances define
with me that's very fine
women are a golden mine
with deeper ravines
and
fathomless spears
can enter
and tear
yet women do not wear
they endear
the thrusts and all
why did god make
a woman after all
for the whole purpose
to receive the water fall
and
then produce a lovely snowfall
Published 4th Feb 2014
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- Edited 4th Feb 2014 1:55am
4th Feb 2014 1:54am
Now this.....is fantastic and beautiful poetry. This made me feel warm inside to read. Luving attitude and smoothness. Luv it!! Take a bow my friend. Gorgeous write! :) in fact it's a RL for me. :)
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4th Feb 2014 2:35am
yeah learning is a continuous process
we also learn to stay longer
with added experience
all know this
thanks for walking
by the streets of Paris
where met Perry with Paris
haahha
just for fun
thanks
we also learn to stay longer
with added experience
all know this
thanks for walking
by the streets of Paris
where met Perry with Paris
haahha
just for fun
thanks
9th Feb 2014 9:07pm
11th Feb 2014 9:56am
30th Mar 2017 8:28pm
twas a pleasure to revisit my own poem with lovely comments thanks purple for all the RL'S
